The chart shows the preferred hobbies of children between 10 and 12 years old.

Nhưng ngoài ra mình còn có thể dùng những cách nào nữa không? Tại những cách nói tuổi bình thường mình không để ý lắm. Các bạn biết chia sẻ với mình với.

Cám ơn các bạn.

• The chart shows the preferred hobbies of 10- to 12-year-olds (or "10- to 12-year-old children").
• The chart shows the preferred hobbies of children aged 10 to 12.

• It's a class of 10-year-old children.
• The children in the class are all aged 10.

Cambridge IELTS 5, test 2 (page 52)

The charts below show the main reasons for study among students of different age groups and the amount of support they received from employers.

The first bar chart compares students of different ages in terms of why they are studying their chosen courses, and the second chart compares the same age groups in terms of the help they require at work.

It is clear that the proportion of people who study for career purposes is far higher among the younger age groups, and decreases steadily with age. The need for employer support also decreases with age, but only up to the point when employees enter their forties.

At age 26 and under, around 80% of students study for career reasons and only 10% study because they have interest in the subject. As the students age advances the propotion of interest in their studies also increases but their career orientation decreases. At age 40 -49, the percentage of students who study for interest and career reason becomes equal, at 40%.AT age 49 and over, about 70% study for interest and 18% study for career reasons.

The second bar chart shows that 70% of employees of age 26 and under, get support from their employers. This propotion of support decreases with the increase in age, untill at age 30 -39, 30% of them get support from their employers. After this age the percentage of employees who get support increases again reaching to 40% , at age 49 and over.

Theo mình thì  có thể làm thế này:

* the first chart:

1. So sánh phần trăm số sinh viên dưới 26 tuổi.

2. Mô tả xu hướng chung khi các độ tuổi tăng lên. Ở mốc 49 tuổi thì bằng nhau.

3. So sánh tỷ lệ khi sinh viên vượt qua độ tuổi 49.

* the second chart:

1. Viết về 2 nhóm tuổi nhỏ nhất.

2. Viết về nhóm tuổi 30-39.

3. Viết về nhóm tuổi lớn nhất.

The bar charts compare students of different ages in terms of why they are studying and whether they are supported by an employer.

It is clear that the proportion of students who study for career purposes is far higher among the younger age groups, while the oldest students are more likely to study for interest. Employer support is more commonly given to younger students.

Around 80% of students aged under 26 study to further their careers, whereas only 10% study purely out of interest. The gap between these two proportions narrows as students get older, and the figures for those in their forties are the same, at about 40%. Students aged over 49 overwhelmingly study for interest (70%) rather than for professional reasons (less than 20%).

Just over 60% of students aged under 26 are supported by their employers. By contrast, the 30-39 age group is the most self-sufficient, with only 30% being given time off and help with fees. The figures rise slightly for students in their forties and for those aged 50 or more.