nemo
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Đây là bài tập về nhà, nhưng mình tìm vẫn chưa tìm ra chỗ nào sai, các bạn xem giúp mình nha. Thanks.

1. Most of advertising aim to persuade people that buying things will make them happier.

2. Advertisers use every efforts to make their products more attractive.

3. Governments should control advertising or even banned.

bambo
  • Bài viết: 27
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1. Most of advertising aim to persuade people to buy things that will make them happy/happier

2. ( I don't know)

3. Governments should control advertisement or even banned.

nobita
  • Bài viết: 37
  • Gia nhập: 08-05-2013
1. Most advertising aims to ...

2. Advertisers make every effort to...

3. ... or even ban it.

quoc huy
  • Bài viết: 22
  • Gia nhập: 23-05-2013
1. Most advertising aim to persuade people to buy things what will make them happier.

hoặc: Most advertising aim to persuade people of thinking that buying things will make them happier.

2. Advertisers make all their efforts to make their products more attractive.

3. Governments should control or even ban advertising.

shure
  • Bài viết: 13
  • Gia nhập: 08-05-2013
2. efforts --> effort
robert
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  • Gia nhập: 29-05-2013
In my opinion:

1. most of + (plural form)noun (advertisements);

2. after "every" only sing.form. For example Every child, not every children, every person, not every people;

3. and the last one: Governments should control advertising or even banned- ban (without -ed-)

simba
  • Bài viết: 57
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1.Most advertising aims to persuade people that buying things will make them happier.

2. ("make an effort" là cụm từ cố định)

Advertisers make every effort to make their products more attractive.

3.Governments should control advertising or even ban it.

loveyou
  • Bài viết: 48
  • Gia nhập: 08-05-2013

1. Most advertising aims to persuade people that buying things will make them happier.

2. Advertisers make every effort to make their products more attractive

- "Most of the advertising" vẫn đúng

Bạn vào đây xem thêm nè: https://ieltspedia.com/tabid/90/g/posts/t/185/Hoi-cach-dung-SOME--ALL----voi-OF-THE.aspx

Ex: "Most people" hoặc "Most of the people"

- every effort vẫn đúng, và dùng với động từ MAKE

3. Governments should control advertising or even ban it

Sau SHOULD dùng bare verb

phuongthao
  • Bài viết: 181
  • Gia nhập: 16-05-2013
1. Most advertising aims (hoặc: most advertisements aim) to persuade people that buying things will make them happier.

2. Advertisers MAKE every effort to make their products more attractive.

hoặc: Advertisers try to make their products as attractive as possible.

(Bạn không thể nói: "use every effort")

3. Governments should control advertising or even BAN IT.


A wise man will make more opportunities than he finds.
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