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1. There is no doubt that the attraction of video games are catching people’s attraction easily.

-->There is no doubt that the attraction of video games is catching people’s attention easily.

2. In our world today where technologies bound to run in our daily existence, playing video games plays a vital part to our own society.

-->In our world today when technologies bound to run in our daily existence, playing video games plays a vital role inour own society.

3. All RPGs (role-playing games), as the name already suggests, involves the player assuming a character and controlling the entire process and unlock tasks to advance.

-->All RPGs (role-playing games), as the name already suggesting, invovle the player assuming a character and controlling the entire process and unlocking tasks to advance.

4. On the one hand, it is undoubtedly that video games have offered much more benefits to human beings.

-->On the one hand, it is undoubted that video games have offered many more benefits to human beings.

5. I personally believe that video games seem to have noxious implications.

-->Personally, I believe that video games tend to have negative impacts on children's development.

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Mấy câu của bạn mình sửa thế này nè:

1.The video games are catching people’s attention easily.

2.The video games plays a vital part to our own society where technologies are bounded to run in our daily basis.

3.All RPGs involve the player assuming a character and controlling the entire process and unlock tasks to advance.

4.It is undoubted that video games have offered much more benefits to human beings.

5.I believe that video games are likely to have noxious implications.

Đây là ý kiến của mình.

1. There is no doubt that video games can attract people easily.

2. Today when technology is already a part of our daily lives, playing video games becomes a new trend in our own society.

3. In all role-playing games, the player assumes a character, controls the entire process and unlocks tasks to advance.

4. On the one hand, there is no doubt that video games have offered more benefits to people.

4. I personally agree that video games may have noxious implications.