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Mình không biết đến phần 3 này rồi đã được giải thoát khỏi chuyện lên dàn ý chưa? Có được : họ hỏi gì thì trả lời đơn giản cái đó thôi không?
Thanks,
Chia buồn với bạn là không phải chỉ đơn giản là họ hỏi gì, trả lời nấy.
Part 3 cũng có cấu trúc của nó: explain, alternative, example.
Vì part 3 bạn cần có câu trả lời dài hơn, chi tiết hơn, để tránh nói lang mang, bạn cần theo 5 bước sau:
Bước 1: Ý tưởng: trả lời câu hỏi trực tiếp, không đi lòng vòng hoặc không dám đánh thẳng chủ đề.
Bước 2: Giải thích: đua ra lý do và giải thích các ý tưởng chi tiết.
Bước 3: Nêu các ý kiến chống đối và phân tích một chút.
Bước 4: cho 1 ví dụ
Bước 5: ý tưởng mới. Đôi khi bạn sẽ nảy ra ý tưởng mới trong khi nói. Hãy thêm nó vào cuối cùng, nếu giám khảo còn để cho bạn nói, và khi bạn đã trình bày hết ý tưởng.
Bạn có thể không bao gồm hết 5 bước mà vẫn được điểm cao, nhưng sẽ hữu ích nếu bạn tập luyện thường xuyên theo 5 bước trên.
Ví dụ: Why do you think some people prefer to buy products from their own countries rather than imported items?
(idea) I suppose it’s because those people want to support the economy of the country they live in.
(explain) If they buy something that was made in their own country, they know that they are contributing to the salaries of workers within the same country,
(alternative) whereas if they buy imported items, a foreign company and its employees will benefit.
(example) For example, if I buy some meat that originates from a local farm rather than a farm in another country, I’m helping one of my fellow citizens to carry on in business.
(another idea) Also, I think that trust is an issue; people might feel that they can trust domestically produced items more than imported ones. |
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2013-07-28T17:56:34Z
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Lý do: Chưa rõ
Vậy làm thế nào để có ý tưởng chứ?
3 mẹo để có ý tưởng cho những câu trả lời dài của phần 3 là:
1. Không ngừng hỏi mình "WHY?"
2. Giải thích các ý trái ngược.
3. Cho ví dụ
EX: Do you think that school children should be encouraged to have their own ideas, or is it more important for them to learn what their teachers give them?
Answer:
I think that we should definitely allow children to be creative and have their own ideas.
1. Why: Children need to develop the ability to think for themselves and solve problems -->(why?) because as adults they will not always have somebody to guide them or tell them what to do.
2. Alternatives: If we don't allow children to have their own ideas, they will be less successful in the adult world; they will be too reliant on others.
3. Example: A doctor, for example, might encounter a situation that he or she hasn't been trained for, but will still be expected to make a decision that could save someone's life.
A wise man will make more opportunities than he finds.
Đúng là hay thật, mình chưa bao giờ dám dùng các ý tưởng chống đối trước đây vào phần này. Nhưng như vậy có làm bài mình quá dài không? Sẽ bị giám khảo stop lại thì sao nhỉ?
EX: Do you think that school children should be encouraged to have their own ideas, or is it more important for them to learn what their teachers give them?
I think in such a world where a fierce competition is high and people tend to come up with new ideas to ahead other people, it is crucial to raise children with creativity approaches. If children always wait to someone puts an idea in front of them, they are very likely can’t find solutions to their problems later in their lives. One of the best example for creativity I think in soccer fields, when two players had same training, same coach, but one learned to use their own ways to reach to the goals, the second one learned to use those already thoughts. Not surprisingly, the first one scoresmore goals, as he probably uses more ways to goal that makes it difficult to predict.
EX: Do you think that school children should be encouraged to have their own ideas, or is it more important for them to learn what their teachers give them?
I think one of the most important thing is that
people should have their own ideas because these ideas what make people different from others. Therefore, this ability start to be acquired during educational period. Beside, if we allow our children to make decision on their own, they will be more self confident. Naturally, self confidence will bring to more job opportunities. In todays highly competitive world, everything is much harder than it used to be, finding a good job is difficult for many people who couldn't have the opportunity to receive education. This is another indicator of importance of encouracing children to have their own ideas.
In my opinion, children should be allowed to have their own ideas because this will enhance their ability to think creatively. We might come across with lots of obstacles in near future and in every paths of life neither our parents nor our teachers can guide us. Some decisions need to be taken base on our thinking and ideology. Self made decisions can take you to your path.
Cách này mình cũng đã từng được học rồi. Mình cũng có thể cho bạn ví dụ này.
What do you think are the most important qualities for friends to have?
1. Bước 1: đưa ra ý kiến của mình: Maybe the most important things are that friends need to share common interests and be honest with each other.
2. Bước 2: why: Friends are people we spend a lot of time with, so it definitely helps if they enjoy doing the same activities or talking about the same topics as we do, and of course we need to be able to trust our friends, so honesty is vital for a good friendship.
3. Bước 3: alternatives, example: I think I would struggle to become friends with someone who didn’t have anything in common with me, or who wasn’t reliable or trustworthy.
Hay quá, các bạn học ở đâu vậy? Mình đang học ở đại học sư phạm Hồ Chí Minh. Mình cũng vừa được dạy chỗ này như thế. Cũng giống như các bạn. Bài mẫu mình học nè:
How important do you think it is for a person to spend some time alone?
B1: I’d say that it’s essential to spend a bit of time alone, even if it’s just a few minutes a day.
B2:
1. why?
When you have a few minutes to yourself, it’s a chance to take stock and reflect on things.
2. why?:Most of us live such busy lives that our brains need time to catch up every now and then.
B3: example / alternatives Personally, I try to have a bit of “me time” every day; I’ll go for a coffee or find a quiet place to sit and read the newspaper. If I never had any time alone, I think I’d go mad!
I have my own ideas. Here they are.
TOPIC 1: What do you think are the most important qualities for friends to have?
I think friends should have the characters of being reliable, loyal and supportive. Because being reliable cause the relationship between them to last long and loyalty makes them to trust each other’s sincerity.
For example, if you trust your friend like yourself you will feel free to share any of your feeling with him or her in order to be relaxed. Supportive quality is a good sense of equality in thoughts with the people whom you feel close to you. Otherwise it would be difficult to strengthen your friendship ties.
TOPIC 2: How important do you think it is for a person to spend some time alone?
In my opinion spending some time alone with your own feelings is the best way of understanding yourself.
Because this loneliness provides an opportunity to think over your purposes and plan for future development. <--As, today, people live and work in a stressful condition having spent a bit of time alone would be relaxing, even healing for them.
The similar characteristics of my life also make me avoid being in a crowded places and having a rest with myself alone.
Mình đã cố gắng nghĩ theo cách riêng của mình, các bạn xem và nhận xét giúp mình nha.
TOPIC 1: What do you think are the most important qualities for friends to have?
I think friends should have the characters of being reliable, loyal and supportive.
Because being reliable cause the relationship between them to last long and loyalty makes them to trust each other’s sincerity.
For example, if you trust your friend like yourself you will feel free to share any of your feeling with him or her in order to be relaxed. Supportive quality is a good sense of equality in thoughts with the people whom you feel close to you. Otherwise it would be difficult to strengthen your friendship ties.
- Như bạn có thể thấy phần reliable mình tô, bạn nói về reliable, đã theo đúng các bước. Tuy nhiên bạn chưa nói thêm về các ý kiến trái chiều của nó. Nhưng, về cơ bản đã ổn.
- Phần loyal: bạn chưa cho ví dụ.
- Phần supportive: bạn trình bày chưa đúng cấu trúc. 2 câu đó của bạn là để giải thích mà bạn lại đưa sau phần ví dụ. Như vậy ý của bạn sẽ bị rời rạc, không liên kết.
- Nếu bạn đưa ra 3 ý lớn: "being reliable, loyal and supportive" thì bạn nên tách ra 3 đoạn, mỗi đoạn nói về 1 ý. Trong mỗi đoạn đó bạn có thể giải thích và cho ví dụ. GIữa 3 ý lớn bạn sẽ dùng các liên từ như: Firstly, Secondly và Thirdly. Như trong ví dụ sau, tuy chưa hoàn thiện nhưng cái hay của bài này là cách phân ý ra 3 phần. Bạn có thể tham khảo.
I believe that friend should have at least three these qualities.
Everyone knows that friend inneed is friend indeed. Last week my friend said to me that he cant promise to solve all my problems but he can promise to be with me in solving problmes.
Secondly,he should not say anything bad about you in your absence,and if you are wrong then he must say to you face to face.
Lastly but not least, friend should be there for you after your death.
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2013-07-29T06:58:47Z
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Lý do: Chưa rõ
A wise man will make more opportunities than he finds.
TOPIC 2: How important do you think it is for a person to spend some time alone?
In my opinion spending some time alone with your own feelings is the best way of understanding yourself.
Because this loneliness provides an opportunity to think over your purposes and plan for future development. <--As, today, people live and work in a stressful condition having spent a bit of time alone would be relaxing, even healing for them. --> đoạn này mình thấy đã hoàn chỉnh ý và cấu trúc tốt
The similar characteristics of my life also make me avoid being in a crowded places and having a rest with myself alone.--> Mình thấy phần này không có nhiệm vụ gì trong bài này hết, không phải giải thích, cũng không phải ví dụ. Theo mình nghĩ có thể đổi lại 1 chút sẽ rõ ý:
Giải thích: There is more to being alone than this. Only when with no one I can leave me in peace.
Example: Whenever being so stressed, I just place myself in a quiet bath and think of nothing else.
A wise man will make more opportunities than he finds.
Bạn sửa giúp mình với:
I personally think that a friend should be trustworthy, supportive and loyal, with whom I can discuss my personal matters which can not be shared with others.
At the same time that companion should have capability of keeping things to himself or herself, also help me to make right decision in tricky situations.
For example, I had job offers from two employers and I could not decide which one is going to be better on long term basis, so I asked for an opinion of my best friend and she proved herself as a better decision maker than me.
Con người chứ đâu phải là thánh đâu mà yêu cầu dữ vậy? Mình thấy hình như bạn đang đăng bản tìm quân sư, chứ không phải là tìm bạn nữa. Yêu cầu cao quá, ai mà làm bạn nổi?
I personally think that a friend should be trustworthy, supportive and loyal, with whom I can discuss my personal matters which can not be shared with others.--> ý này là cũng nói về trustworthy, trong khi bạn đang nói chung về cả 3 tố chất--> trùng ý--> bỏ
At the same time
từ này dùng để chuyển sang 1 ý mới có chức năng tương đương that companion should have capability of keeping things to himself or herself,--> ý này cũng là nói về trustworthy, nhưng lại trùng ý với đoạn : "with whom I can discuss my personal matters which can not be shared with others"
also help me to make right decision in tricky situations.--> qua ý mới, giải thích cho supportive--> Như vậy, cách trình bày ý của bạn chưa theo logic và mẫu chúng ta đã học. Bạn có thể sửa bài mình theo hướng như bạn Phuong Thao sửa topic 1 đấy. Tách ra 3 đoạn bạn nhé.
For example, I had job offers from two employers and I could not decide which one is going to be better on long term basis, so I asked for an opinion of my best friend and she proved herself as a better decision maker than me.
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2013-07-29T08:04:51Z
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Lý do: Chưa rõ
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