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The diagrams below are existing and proposed floor plans for the redevelopment of an art gallery.
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2013-10-03T17:03:50Z
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Lý do: Chưa rõ
Bạn có thể dùng dàn ý như sau:
- Introduction: paraphrase the question
- Summary: the main changes to the gallery (entrance and use of space)
- Paragraph comparing entrance, lobby, office, education area
- Paragraph comparing use of space for exhibitions
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The diagram illustrates a proposal concerning new changes needed to an art-gallery. It is clear that there are remarkable changes required to re-developing the art gallery.
The new proposal suggests to make the entrance from Parkinson road towards the building through the permanent exhibit , instead of the entrance which is at the east of the building, after replacing the temporary exhibition space by the permanent exhibition space.
As regards to eastern side of the building, where the lobby and the office are located , it is replaced by an educating area constituting almost three quarter of the space with a store making up the remainder..
In the western side of the building , they have established a special exhibition with its store in the new area which was not part of the gallery.
To conclude, the new proposal is taking into account the need to have a spacious gallery room not to mention the need for a room for a special exhibition.
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Để mình làm thử.
The diagram clearly illustrates two plans designed in order to redevelop an art gallery. The sketch can simply be subdivided into a central part as well as right and left wings. There are three main differences between the two plans.
Firstly, the existing plan intends to make the right wing into an office and a lobby through which the entrance is set, whereas the proposed plan aims to put that wing into an education area and a store plant.
Secondly, the central part of the sketch is supposed to be subdivided into two parts for temporary exhibitions with a third part for permanent exhibition in the existing plan, compared with a one single large continuous part for permanent exhibition to which the gate is opened in the proposed plan.
Finally, according to the existing plan, the left wing is not intended to be included into the gallery, while the same area is specified to be an exhibition store and a special exhibition space in the proposed plan.
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